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Reviews for Routine

By : Ykarzel
  • From Animom57 on February 20, 2010
    well, hell. Make me want to slit my wrists, why don't you? :p
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  • From GudenMulle on February 11, 2010
    Oh my god.. So sad but good none the less! I'm.. lost for words right now.. But really really good!!!
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  • From ANON - Kiweeo on December 10, 2005
    That was beautiful... made me cry...
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on July 22, 2005
    Okay, I've been putting off reviewing this for months, but you wrote The Lair saying you weren't sure if you should post it or not. I think that the story is excellently well crafted, it wouldn't have hit me so hard if it wasn’t. Some people like this kind of story and I'm sure that there are a few at The Lair who would. The thing is, I would never have willingly read this story had it a proper warning. I don't like stories with character death in them in general, and the emotional scarring that Jou went through was so well written that it became a part of me. It took me a few days to get it out of my system. I know putting a warning of character death would short change the devastating impact of the ending, but at the very least it needs to be labeled a darkfic with heavy emotional abuse. I *think* that might have kept me from reading it unwittingly without spoiling the ending. As I said, it's well written. A poorly written story wouldn't have bothered me like this and it shows your strength as a writer to draw the reader into the story and become a part of it. But I gotta tell ya, without a warning and just the definition to go by, I thought it was going to be a story about injecting some spice in a relationship that had lost it's passion. Even after it became obvious that I'd had the wrong idea, I still kept hoping for a happy ending and thus was devastated when I worked out the ultimate conclusion we were left with. And it's perfect where you left it; anything more would have detracted from the true impact of the ending. Again, I do think you can post this on The Lair, but I think you need to label it very carefully.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2005
    i'm so sorry ....
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  • From ANON - HelBourne on May 18, 2005
    This is sad... And yet I still love it! Is that wrong?...
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  • From ANON - Tory on April 23, 2005
    *whimpers*
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  • From ANON - dark_Angel on April 23, 2005
    Holy. Shit. damn, that was good. wah~~ too bad I can't write like that.....*runs off a cliff*
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  • From ANON - Victoria Violet on March 10, 2005
    I read this fic several moonths ago on another site and it was my first Seto/Jou. It made me so sad I just sat and cried. I hope you finally take pity on Jou and do a sequel. It's mean to have him just leave. I have to thank you for getting me hooked on Seto/Jou though^^; You're one of my favorite Yu-Gi-Oh writers. I've read the Shades stories, Ice, and Beachin' Trip. Is it ok if I post your stories on my site? If so e-mail me. Anyways, back on topic, CONTINUE!!!!!! Or I'll cry again.::eyes tear up:: Seto was Jou's source of happiness and now Jou left.::Sniffles:: Well ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Ketsi on February 16, 2005
    I NEED MORE!!!!
    Write a sequel. Or a next chapter...or ANYTHING!
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  • From ANON - Kira on February 06, 2005
    This has been beautifully written. The emotions in this are just amazing. The discription, too. I'm sure others have asked you but, could you write a second chapter to this story. It has quite a bit of potential to just be left alone.
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  • From DarkRoseBlood on February 02, 2005
    Damn... I have to tell you that was... oh... just so awe-inspiring... Utterly beautiful fic that brings out the harsh realites in life. Really, I do love the title and the whole concept behind the fic. It just amazes me how wonderful and brilliant your writing is. Pity, it doesn't seem like you're going to continue this since this fic is really one worth continuing. Its simply /above/ many of the other Seto/Jou fics out there (not that there aren't some really good ones out there) but this just has to be cold, but such is life, ne? Lovely fic that has such a desperate sadness to it that I love. Poor, poor Seto and Jou... Truly brilliant.
    Kudos

    ~DarkRoseBlood ^_^
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  • From ANON - nicky on January 28, 2005
    I don't know what to say... any word I might come up with wouldn't be worth this review.
    And it doesn't matter anyway, does it? What I say, I mean. No, it doesn't.
    You touched me though.
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  • From ANON - YamiGirl on December 14, 2003
    I wow, I really like this, do go on.
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  • From ANON - Reppa on December 10, 2003
    THAT was incredibly good. One of the best I've read yet. Indeed, as some have said, there should be a sequel and I will be on the look out for one. A very splendid job, brava!
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