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Reviews for Heaven and Hell

By : Loreley
  • From ANON - DarkMystic on August 21, 2005
    Im sorry if this sounds mean or anything...but...I would probably fall down and die, if there were any type of update posted on this story ever again.
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on August 15, 2005
    Argness, I wanna read the other chapters but i been checking for months and nothing. *cries and falls to the ground in a fit of rage.* Argness! I wont give up on this story darnit! Update PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on July 31, 2005
    when are you gunna update??????????????
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on July 08, 2005
    I was wondering when you were going to update, it seems like its been forever...Could atleast send around emails saying that the next chapter was going to take a while. Ugh this story is going just like all the other good ones, the author never finishes when they say that they are, and they never give an excuse or say they are sorry. If you wernt going to update, then you should of wrote the whole story, and then posted it, that way people would be happier.
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  • From on July 01, 2005
    what is...this?!
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on June 10, 2005
    Just checking up on this fic, please you are killing me. Update soon! >.< *sighs frustratedly.*
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on March 31, 2005
    Ok, before I begin on what I think of this chapter, I would like to say thank you for telling me about the update.
    The chapter was very...hm, well lets just say I really like ZETH! Lol. ^_^ As for the others....They seem kind of tense...maybe they need a back rub? *Raises her hand!* ^_^ Ok enough of that *Wipes the drool from her face.* I want to know what happeneds on their first night alone in a scary mansion, not to mention she just asked uhm Larva to bed with her...*COUGH!* Anything could happen, but I think you should have something happen with her and eros or her and ZETH! Cause that would be a great twist, but I dont think Eros is one to break his own rules? Or is sleeping with the contestant breaking a rule? *Shrugs.* Zeth on the otherhand has been looking really close at her though. Anyways now you know who my favorite guys are lol. Zeth Larva, and Eros of course, he is a god after all.
    Continue on with the story anyways,
    I would really like to know what happeneds next,
    so update asap. Happy writeing!
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  • From ANON - Shadows on March 31, 2005
    That was highly entertaining. XD
    I may not know who half of the bishies are, but it's well written and I really enjoyed it.
    Update soon? *puppy dog eyes*
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on March 17, 2005
    Hello, I love your story, and the way you write, I wish to see more as soon as possible, so that mean you better be a fast updater, or I will be mad. *Pouty face.* I was sad when it ended so soon, and the chapters were kinda short dont yah think? Could you kinda put more into the chapters you think? Anyways, Im really excited, and looking forward to the next update.
    P.S. Could you write me when you have updated, would really apreciate it.
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  • From ANON - doyoubelieveinmagic101 on March 14, 2005
    Youve grabbed my attention update soon!@
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  • From ANON - Aeris on March 12, 2005
    Yey!!! Subaru is here!!! I just can't wait for the next chapter (but ironically, I still will). I'm looking forward for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 07, 2005
    good story please finish sexxy.
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  • From ANON - Not A Monkey on February 15, 2005
    YAY!!! I adore Shigure and Seto *huggles author* So please please please like umm...keep it up ^^
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