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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a real great story, please continue *puppy eyes* pwease? ^_^
Greetz K-chan
Greetz K-chan
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November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi :-D
I love the story. I like your concept of bringing this adventure 50 years into the future.
There's only one part that I didn't like: the grandson's name. I know that Yugo sounds close to Yugi. I don't know why I didn't like the name. Yugi's name is appropriate because Yugi stands for game in Japanese. However, I'll just wear a blind eye whenever I see the name and concentrate on what's more important: the story. But if you do decide to change Yugo's name, then just do a little research by seeing what makes this guy so different from Yugi and maybe find the Japanese equivalent for that word (as his name). But anyway, change or no change for the name, I'm concentrating on the story ;-D
Anyway, keep writing...looking forward to the next chapter and please email me (if you have time) when you update it. Will read and review.
I love the story. I like your concept of bringing this adventure 50 years into the future.
There's only one part that I didn't like: the grandson's name. I know that Yugo sounds close to Yugi. I don't know why I didn't like the name. Yugi's name is appropriate because Yugi stands for game in Japanese. However, I'll just wear a blind eye whenever I see the name and concentrate on what's more important: the story. But if you do decide to change Yugo's name, then just do a little research by seeing what makes this guy so different from Yugi and maybe find the Japanese equivalent for that word (as his name). But anyway, change or no change for the name, I'm concentrating on the story ;-D
Anyway, keep writing...looking forward to the next chapter and please email me (if you have time) when you update it. Will read and review.
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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. There was a fic like this that was never continued. i want to see this continued!