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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you better update soon... OR ELSE!!!!!
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great start keep going can't wait for your update
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting good ^_^ UPDATE!
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love the rewrite and i am so glad that you took the time to redo this. I loved the story line when you first had it now it's even better and so much more indepth i hope you update soon because i just can't wait to see what happens next and what Kaiba is gonna do about jou and his father so update soon
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story please write more. I like how you had Kaiba hit Joey so he coudn't run off. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more.
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have got the start of a really good story. I am looking forward to where you go from here. Please keep up the good work.
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Kaiba earns Joey's trust by punching him...IS HE INSANE? I hope Joey punches him back! And I hope you update soon.
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December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, this is GOOD, keep it up and UPDATE SOON...!
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December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GOOD, I need more lots more plz, UPDATE SOON!
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