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for Stinging Beauty

by Fel5

person Kat
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shoulderlong, golden hair was tied together in a ponytail, held by a simple string of black leather.

Plwhitwhite silk shirt, black pants and dress shoes, short, blood-red coat with black collar and fitting red scarf-Jou’s whole attire seemed destined to compliment him in any way possible.

*wipes drool from chin* Oh... YUUUUUUUUMMMMM

“No comment.”
With that, the blond brushed past the stunned press, hooked his brunet lover under and sauntered with him through the main entry, never once looking back.
*claps* Ohhhh beautiful! I loved it! *laughs hysterically*

“Yes. Yes I will marry you, Jounouchi Katsuya.”
*squeals, claps and bounces up and down* YAAAAAAAAAAY

OOOO love it, love it! What a way to end the year!!!

Kat
person Saelbu
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so funny! LOL Update soon, who said revenge isn't sweet? Ja ne! ^_~
person Kat
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“Get on that bed, now, so I can pound you senseless, Jounouchi Katsuya!”
*laughs* Yeah, do it!

“Akagi? Yes, I have decided about the changes-no, I am absolutely sure. Hai. Never mind the status, yes-I am very well aware of that, I am the one who wrote it after all. Indubitably. Hai. I expect it tomorrow on my desk-yes, I am aware that it is past twelve now. Your point being? Hn. I thought so. Sayonara.”
*snorts* You evil tease, you!!!

“Iie, says here, twelve copies of Urushihara’s ‘Love’, three copies of ‘La Blue Girl’, director’s cut, five ‘Bondage Faries-The Collector’s Edition,’” at this, Sugoroku cringed and shot Yugi a dark look, who had gone almost deathly pale, “and one life-sized inflatable ‘Teeta’ doll, complete with her ‘Plastic Little’ uniform. Paid in advance and to be delivered as soon as possible, Kame Game Shop, Domino City, signed, Muutou Yugi.”
*shrieks, wakes the neighbors and falls over laughing*

Obviously, somebody had considered it funny attaching a note with Ryou’s phone number on it, reading ‘will translate Japanese adult movies innglinglish and vice versa for free.”screscreams in laughter and wakes the people across the street*

*gasps for breath* Otogi's hair... *howls*

Perfect! Loved every word!!!

Kat
person Chikky`
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I loved it!!! And I cried when Jou and Seto broke up... if you do not finish this novel I will have to hurt you seriously. So when so you start writing again... please tell me soon. I wish for you to email me as soon as it starts again because I will read everything... and they better not brek up again!
person Chikky`
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I loved it!!! And I cried when Jou and Seto broke up... if you do not finish this novel I will have to hurt you seriously. So when so you start writing again... please tell me soon. I wish for you to email me as soon as it starts again because I will read everything... and they better not break up again!
person saelbu
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So glad you got another chapter uploaded, I can't wait to read the next chapter, ja ne! ^_~
person saelbu
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad you updated!!! ^___^
Loved this chapter!!! ^_~
person Kat
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the little vignettes! Those were fun! Oh my god, the last one was just beyond hysterical!!! *cackles madly* You got busted by the boyfriend?! *laughs*

Seriously, this was worth the wait. I can't wait to see what they do to get even with Yugi and the others. *EG* I know they won't let that challenge pass. Riiiiiight??

Kat
person Saelbu
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally! I can review, I so loved this chapter and I can't wait to read more, update soon, ja ne! ^__^
person LaLa
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
{cries} th-that w-as da s-sweetest/s-ssaddest thing I've ever read!{sniffles} you are one evil person for writing such a thing....{cuddles Seto} However, I have no choice but to continue reading....please warn me so i can have some tissues close by next time.....bai bai....{runs off still cuddling Seto close mumbling something about evil authoresses}

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