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September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. I hope you will write more. I like the story.
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is so sweet. We're so used to have Kaiba act like a bastard this almost feels OOC lol. But seriously, this is really good. =D
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story, hope you continue soon.
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June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. I'll look forward to reading chapter 2. ^_^
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June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good story very interesting, just on suggestion get a proof reader to go through your work there were a few grammer mistakes that made the story hard to follow at times. other than that good first chapter