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By : Sparks
  • From ANON - Cynthia on July 21, 2012
    *twitch*twitch* I just gave Kaiba head...I'm not sure how I feel about that...
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  • From ANON - Cynthia on July 21, 2012
    Hi! I really enjoyed your story not only that it was kinda of a shock to see my name in a fanfic for once lol. My first name is Cynthia and my last name is Lopez lol. But i did enjoy it! Keep writting :)
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  • From ANON - hoogily on July 17, 2012
    I have been out of fanfiction for 6 years, every once in a while trying to make a comeback but failing. However, this story has me completely hooked.
    I'm glad to be back. Thank you. Keep up the hot sex. Can't wait for the juicy kiss.
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  • From NAnderson on July 10, 2012
    Hahaha what a clever little brother ;) He is a Kiba indeed! And what a great update. I can't wait to see what happens next
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  • From KeiMaxwell on July 09, 2012
    I totally cooed at Joey telling Seto he had been a virgin before that one fateful night. *w* I love it! Love this story so much, haha! xD Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Valaris on July 07, 2012
    I truly love this story you have concocted. I'm at the edge of my seat every time, and screaming and gasping at every turn of events. You my dear have a gift and I'm glad you're sharing it with mere mortals such as myself. I constantly wait for you updates (I check everyday) x3 You are very inspiring with how descriptive you are and is actually tempting me to write my own fanfic but I don't I'll be as good as you. Keep up the good work and keep it coming with those updates. -bribes with cookies-
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  • From dragonlady222 on July 07, 2012
    I love this story. I am glad I can review again. Seto is falling for Joey, hard. He needs to take Joey hime with him and get him out of that hellhole.
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  • From Jei_19 on June 28, 2012
    [Warning Long Review Ahead]

    Before I begin I just want to let you know that for this being your first yugioh fanfic, you are doing an amazing job so far. I've been reading Yugioh fanfiction for over 8 years now so I've turned into a bit of a fanfic snob as time continues to pass. Unfortunately, the amount of good/decent fanfics for this fandom has waned and I was beginning to lose hope (especially with puppyshipping). That is, until I stumbled upon your fic on here. To be honest, I didn't expect much since the summary sounds very vague and elementary, but I was pleasantly surprised at how well written this story is. You manage to keep Seto and Joey in character while adding a sprinkle of humor here and there to balance everything out.

    And don't let me started on the sex scenes. They're so delicious and smutty to the point I can also taste them. I love the inner struggle Joey is having with his "alter ego". I'm hoping will get to see Seto's inner struggles too, when he realizes that he wants the mutt for more than just hot, mind blowing sex (at least I hope he does anyway).

    Also, major kudos for incorporating Kanye West's Devil in a New Dress. Usually, I'm not a big fan of music in fanfiction (even if it's just the name mentioned and not any of the actual lyrics), but I'm actually a huge Kanye fan and I adore that song. I even went back and reread this chapter with the song playing in the background on my computer. Yes, I'm that weird and perverted. Oh, and for some reason I hope we can see maybe some crossdressing, costumes, or roleplay in the future? I think Seto would thoroughly enjoy making Joey's dog dream/fantasy come to life or even make him wear some sexy lingerie. Just a thought.

    I've frequent this website a lot over the years and I've never bothered to sign up/in to leave a review once they added the rule....until now that is. So feel honored that I did all this work just to tell you how awesome you are (but no seriously, you really are awesome). I'm eagerly looking forward to knew chapters and what is in store for those two.
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  • From uniqueindividual on June 25, 2012
    Dear Lord, I thought this story was gunna have some serious first timer problems, but you've avoided all of them. To say it simply, I love this story. The characters are believable and their emotions flow naturally. The "duo" personality you gave Joey is very interesting. I really like Cynthia and how you've portrayed Mai. And, of course, the sex is totally hot. I am definitely keeping an eye on this story. I can't wait to see what happens with Mokuba!! Please keep up the great work!
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  • From BlackRosePirate on June 24, 2012
    Omg I can just imagine poor little mokubas face

    "big brother what are you doing to jou O.O" *faints* BWAHAHAHAHAHA


    Update reaaalllly soon
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  • From KeiMaxwell on June 24, 2012
    Another very hot chapter, yay! :D That last part with Seto licking him clean "§$%&/ I can't even, omg! You render me speechless here! Dx
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  • From NAnderson on June 23, 2012
    Now before I get into my review let me share with you the line that left my mouth as I was reading the end of the latest chapter... "Fuck no! Mokusba, don't open that door!" I always get the damnedest looks from my friends when I speak while read fanfics.
    But back to the story! I very much love hos this is developing. Even if I wish the chapters were longer lol. I can't wait to see ho Seto's baby brother handles what he is about to walk in on!
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  • From princessbarb21 on June 23, 2012
    this is really well done i really enjoyed this so far keep the good work up
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  • From AtomBunny on June 23, 2012
    Oh shit.... Mokuba... that can't be good.

    On the edge of my seat for more!
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  • From KeiMaxwell on June 22, 2012
    Wow. When I started reading this yesterday, I didn't expect much, I have to admit. The story seemed to be either completely senseless PWP or of the darker, more cruel kind. The first cannot hold my attention for a longer time and the latter is just not my thing. But you pleasantly surprised me, I have to say. This is a really good story and for once I totally like in what way you made Jou to be the slut in this. With himself doubting that side of his, it gets pretty realistic. And I also like the feelings you can see Seto developing, without him actually admitting to them. Love the role his PA and Mai play as well. Keep it up, I want to read more! :D
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