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By : Sparks
  • From dragonlady222 on September 28, 2012
    I hope Joey's dad is fearful enough to not send Joey out to the streets. Seto has to be really careful around his genius brother. Sorry for not reviewing earlier. I lost the story.
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  • From ANON - Cutenekojin on September 20, 2012
    You know, i've been reading this like none stop since last night (almost pulled an allnighter) only to realize that you haven't finished the fic and now I do desperate for the rest!
    Each chapter keeps me entertained and I'm really lOoking forward for the rest!
    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - aleusha on September 09, 2012
    please tell me you havent quit!
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  • From Bloody00Mary on September 02, 2012
    GOD, WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COMING OUT!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE! I FUCKING BEG YOU!!! DAMN THIS STORY'S HOT!
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  • From ANON - aleusha on August 16, 2012
    cant wait for the next one
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  • From Serenaj0 on August 11, 2012
    Suffering from withdrawal! Need next chapter!
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  • From ANON - loverofyaoi on August 08, 2012
    Ah man, I want Ted to come back somehow and pay for hanging up on Joey. He was pretty rude even if he thought Joey was a prank caller. Anyways, yay! you updated! I am glad Joey told Yugi about his lust self, now maybe they can help him. I look forward to more!
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  • From AtomBunny on August 08, 2012
    I'm still really enjoying this and I agree with an earlier reviewer. This story is the story that *you* want to tell. Don't worry so much about what we will think of it, just write what feels right to you. :D

    Looking forward to seeing what happens next. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2012
    I like this story a lot! Please keep writing :]
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  • From KeiMaxwell on July 30, 2012
    Ahaha, loved Jou's thoughts in class. :,D Hilarious.
    I don't think these chapters are boring at all. :3 You do need to get the plot on and a major part of that is Jou's development. I do think that when Yuugi mentioned keeping that the Other Jou under control, all readers where like 'hell, no, let him be!'. xDD
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  • From dragonlady222 on July 30, 2012
    Poor Joey, I hope Yugi and Yami can help him, at least, control his other; if not banish him. He is going to stay with Mai for a while and that is good. He needs to be away from his dad. Seto better get him a phone soon.
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  • From dragonlady222 on July 30, 2012
    Too bad his friends are so nosy, but it is because they care. Tea can be annoying. Kaiba is being really nice for a change.
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  • From ANON - Jei on July 29, 2012
    Even though it was a PG chapter It was still enjoyable since its moving the plot along. I'm glad Joey was able to at least come out to YUGI, even if he still isn't comfortable saying who he's being sexually involved with. I also like how open minded and supportive Yugi was so its good to know he and Yami can help Joey with controlling and even accepting the "other" him. I'm so curious to see how Mai will respond and if Joey might leak more info to her since she's a older woman with sexual experience under her belt.
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  • From ANON - loverofyaoi on July 28, 2012
    Woot! So many updates! The story is going great! You don't have to worry about living up to the readers expectations. This story is your baby and you are allowed to raise it however you want. I look forward to more updates!
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  • From ANON - catti on July 27, 2012
    Im really starting to enjoy this story...I know procrasinator but I like to have a few chapters written before I am totally committed to a story..good job...do you know maggiemay? Ill have to recommend this story for her to read..She would like it..
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