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By : Sparks
  • From uniqueindividual on November 22, 2012
    that was hot as usual, but I hope regular Joey doesn't completely disappear. I do like him.
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on November 22, 2012
    They, the three of them, Joey's other, Seto and his father are slowly killing him and breaking down his self-esteem. I hope his friends can help him before he is completely lost.
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on November 22, 2012
    Poor Joey, his other is trying to take him over completely which would be a disaster for everyone. I hope Yami does get to talk to Joey. He can probably help.
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  • From ANON - rukianeechan on November 22, 2012
    What can i do for you to update faster? what can I do? I'll do anything!! I checked the website and when i see you updated imminently started dancing around the room! and you didn't disappoint.. My god u should think about doing this for living I'll buy your stories. Ah...the last chapter, when Seto said: if anyone touches you I'll kill them?... ah... I fell off my chair!!! Does he even have any idea what is he feeling> How wrong is he when he thinks sex is about power. Does he have any idea how much is he getting sucked into this? and Joey? my god does Joey have any idea how much he is losing himself in all this? Does their head made out of cheese?
    Please please please update more..if I review once a day and just call u awesome would u plz update sooner? Ah, I'll be reading these 2 last chapter 800 times until You update again!
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  • From ANON - bloodysword99 on November 09, 2012
    holy fuck! this totally awesome!! emotion, sex, denial, pressure, depression, pity, anger, greed, lust and LOVE!!!!!! :3 i love it!!!!!!
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  • From Bloody00Mary on November 06, 2012
    GOD when is the NEXT update?! This story's fantastic, it deserves to be updated!
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  • From uniqueindividual on October 24, 2012
    even his mind fantasies effectively raping him was hot, bravo
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  • From ANON - Lella on October 11, 2012
    wow, I wasn't expecting the story to take the turn it did! The plot advancing to his soul room was really something.
    every new chapter has something good, but still, I think my favorite tidbit is in the first chapter- "carefully removing his sapphire cuff links and setting them aside" that little detail just creates so much imagery for the scene. And really, a well dressed man is quite attractive.
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  • From NAnderson on October 01, 2012
    Ah I have been dieing for this story to be update! I had such a happy dance moment when I saw it :) And that last chapter was glorious. I thought Joey would fight a bit harder, but even with thinking that, I still LOVED that last chapter. And I'm dieing to see if it will effect how the interactions go in the next chapter.
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  • From Serenaj0 on October 01, 2012
    I hate you so much. Stop. Just stop. You're killing me. Please. No. More.
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  • From ANON - Jei on September 30, 2012
    Yay! I'm sooooo happy you updated! I was getting worried that you were going to abandon this fic! I like older sister role Mai is playing and how free she is about her sexuality and the way she lives. I hope Joey will take a page from her book (but not all of them since I only want Joey with Kaiba).

    This chapter was so unusual yet extremely fascinating. I like how it's established that Joey and "the other Joey" are in fact the same person unlike Yami/Hikari relationship. The other Joey's plan to bring thei soul together was soooo HOTT. I love Bad-Seto more than Good-Seto but I can understand why Joey secretly yearns for those two sides of Seto as they both are insanely sexy in their own right. Joey getting a blowjob from himself was a mindfuck in the best way possible.

    I'm so ready for Joey to stop being in denial for his desires for Kaiba and come to terms that he just has a high (and rather lewd) sex-drive! Nothing wrong with that. Lets just hope that in the up coming chapters The Real Seto can help show him that being a "slut" isn't so bad and can come with plenty of perks. Especially if your Seto Kaiba's whore. Lol.

    Anyway great chapters as always and glad to know you haven't forgotten about us readers nor Joey and Seto!
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  • From AtomBunny on September 29, 2012
    Oh, it's good to see you back! :D

    Poor Joey seems to be having a massive crisis, but at least he has Mai there for him. I will look forward to seeing what happens next.

    (And is the Cube the same one that Mo Farah beat a few months back? Or is there more than one?)
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  • From dragonlady222 on September 28, 2012
    Poor Joey. He has a lot of repressions. I hope he can save himself.
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  • From dragonlady222 on September 28, 2012
    Joey is really conflicted. I hope Mai helped. I don't think Yugi is as naive or innocent as Joey thinks.
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  • From dragonlady222 on September 28, 2012
    Seto is falling hard and is really in denial. I hope he gets Joey out of that place soon.
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