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By : Sparks
  • From ANON - Mar on March 11, 2013
    OMG!!! MORE CHAPTERS!! YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! I was totally right about the call being in regards to Joey's dad. I feel bad for Yugi, but I don't blame Seto either. I wouldn't want people poking around my relationship JUST as it's developing, as well as it being attached to some sketchy aspects, that neither he or Joey want exposed. I hope that Yugi understands and that Joey comes around to talk to him on better terms. Also, Mokuba is just too damn cute for words. I can't wait to see how Joey and Seto are going to transition their relationship. I also can't wait to see what's in that bag! More pleaaase!
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  • From kuromori on March 10, 2013
    4 chapters in one weekend!? Be still my beating heart!! Loved the interlude chapter - the glimpse of how Seto got to be the way he is, and how his experiences with Joey are slowly starting to put a crack in that abuse. I'm liking the way you're using the soul room idea in this fic - I wonder if Good!Seto will be a key in helping/allowing Joey to become okay with his sexuality and feelings for Seto. Also LOVED Mokuba's reaction to Joey - the boy is too cute, and just how I expected him to react. I had a feeling the phone call had to do with Joey's dad, and poor Yugi and his good intentions! I hope it doesn't affect their friendship too much! All in all, love all around for the developments - thanks for treating us to lots of updates!!
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  • From ANON - Mar on March 10, 2013
    More story yay! Love the plotty chapters; I had been wondering if Gozaburo had messed up Seto in the love-arena since Seto's always been like "sex = domination" . Glad to see the the romance element into this :) can I guess that the phone call is from Joey's Dad on the matter if getting more money for his son's usage? Please write more soon!
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  • From ANON - brp on March 10, 2013
    Awwwwwww i neeeeeed mooooooooore!!! O.O plz update reli reli soon ^^
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  • From KeiMaxwell on February 27, 2013
    Oh. My. God. Thank you for this lovely update! I've been waiting for it and you didn't disappoint. So hot! They funny bits in between were awsome, too, but the porn! Omg, the porn!! I'm awed. Love it.
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  • From uniqueindividual on February 25, 2013
    Whoo! You're back! And bearing such lovely presents, mainly porn. I have nothing more to add to this chapter other than: well, that escalated quickly. I hope Joey can find a nice happy medium with his normal self and his lust self. Also, Kaiba better take real good care of him. I look forward to their new living arrangements!
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  • From kuromori on February 25, 2013
    I'm so glad you're continuing this story!! It's one of my favorites - I love your portrayal of Seto and Joey: the constant push-pull; the trash-talking; their quiet, disconcerting moments of understanding and affection; the hot, hot sex...those idiots don't know they're in love, sigh. Also gotta give props to Mai and Cynthia!

    Heh, Mar and I are friends IRL and reading this together - I disagree with her on the whole public sex thing. I think the fantasy crosses the line a bit too much for them to ever have a functioning, healthy relationship lol. While I think The Mutt would enjoy it, I think it would be too humiliating for Joey, and too much of a imbalance of power/dominance. But I can't wait to read what you have in store (perhaps a kiss!?)!!
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on February 25, 2013
    I'm glad that Joey and Seto decided that they should stay together. That was half the battle.
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  • From ANON - Mar on February 25, 2013
    OMG I keep re-reading this story, and like Joey-I can't get enough of it. Is it bad that I want Seto's fantasy of fucking Joey infront if his friends, to come true? Maybe when a concerned Yugi/Yami show up, Seto can give them a demonstration of how much, Joey likes it ;) more please!! This story makes my brain melt!!!
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on February 25, 2013
    I'm glad Seto is being nicer. I hope they can still be saved and be a couple.
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on February 25, 2013
    I hope they can help before Joey is lost completely. He needs to get rid of the other him and Dark Seto. They are completely killing his spirit.
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on February 25, 2013
    I wish Seto would call Joey by name more often instead of slut and whore. He is still demeaning him. He should realize by now that his father did this without his consent.
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on February 25, 2013
    Poor Joey really needs to talk to Yami. Seto is an ass.
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  • From Bloody00Mary on February 24, 2013
    Yeah! desperate, jealous Seto for Joey is like Super HAWT!
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  • From Bloody00Mary on February 24, 2013
    YOU'RE BACK! Don't ever go away again please!
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