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By : Sparks
  • From ANON - Mar on February 24, 2013
    OMG...omg...out of all the chapters, just when I believe that it's finally "hotter than I can handle", you just outdo yourself. God, this chapter. So many kink buttons hot. And I LOVE how desperate Seto had become for Joey. They are just a pile of guuuuuuuuh....please write more!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - BlackRosePirate on February 24, 2013
    ^^ i love this story i was really happy to see it was updated ^^ plz update soon i wana see what will happen with them next ^^
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on February 23, 2013
    I lost this story for a while. Glad I found it again. He has no clue what is going on and neither does Kaiba. I hope they can figure this out.
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  • From ANON - Mar on February 17, 2013
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE! This story is incredibly sexy and I love your characterizations!! MOOOOOAR!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 14, 2013
    Mooooore plleaeeeaaaase!!!
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  • From ANON - rukianeechan on December 04, 2012
    You are a tease aren't ya?? right when the yummy stuff is coming you leave us hanging? Naughty Naughty!! well what can I say, it's worth every second of wait and you don't see me complaining when you updated so fast, thank you for that.
    At some point I think Joey will open his eyes and see that being Kaiba seto's whore is not making him a slut( he wont be wanting to have sex with anyone else), but making him in love with Seto and we want to please the ones we love and let them indulge in their fantasies and I think Seto will also realize that wanting to possess joey so bad( no one can replace Joey for him and he is addicted to him so bad) means that he is also in love with joey. They are both so caught up in their own ignorance and stupidity, they can't see how much they belong to each other and need each other.
    I congratulate you for being able to show something so real about human relationships that can be dark, twisted and contradictory to the stereotypical images of S&M and sex for pay out there.
    Checking the website 8 times a day until you upload again.

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  • From KeiMaxwell on December 04, 2012
    After a long abstinence from reading fanfiction, I finally caught up on the last chapters of this. And I'm not disappointed. This is still an awsome story, both in the feelings and the sex department. I like how you make Joey "transform" slowly. But I have to say I'm glad he didn't get the bells on his piercings, lol. For my taste at least that would be a bit over the top. And omg, I hope Yami and Yugi don't manage to get into Other Joey's soul room, lol! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Ashley on December 03, 2012
    I did not think this story would be quite my cup of tea because of the darker themes it has, but my have I enjoyed this story! In my opinion, this is well written with enough humor thrown in amongst the more serious tones. I appreciate the work that has gone into this story and look forward to any other works or continuations! Thank you.
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  • From Bloody00Mary on December 03, 2012
    Yeah! New Chapters! You Make Me So Frickin' Happy!
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  • From uniqueindividual on December 02, 2012
    Oh god, I also agree with Joey, "Don't...stop." In all honesty, I kind of want to see Yugi and Yami's reaction to Joey's lust self. It would be hilarious. But first, some awesome fucking would be nice, you sorta built it up and left it hanging...and now I want more.
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  • From NAnderson on December 01, 2012
    Oh this story gets more twisted and wonderful with each chapter :) I wonder what will be happening with that moose now ;) I hope the juices start flowing again!
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  • From ANON - Valaris on December 01, 2012
    I'm so happy you updated!! I have been rereading these updated chapters over and over again. This story is a delightful read. You are so awesome in how to describe each character. I hope Joey does merge with Other Joey in a way that he is still himself and can fully understand that loving sex isn't a bad thing, and I hope Seto will care for Joey enough for Joey to see that he is loved. Hopefully Yami and Yugi don't get the wrong idea about things though but I can hope that the gang will accept Seto and Joey being lovers. Update please!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on December 01, 2012
    Poor Joey. I really hope he gets a chance to talk to Yami. His slut-side needs to be locked up. His father has totally destroyed his self esteem He needs his friends to help him. Seto needs to let his feeling out and treat Joey with a little more respect. It would help if he would actually listen and hear what Joey said to him. He was the first and only one, Joey is not a whore.
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  • From NAnderson on November 23, 2012
    Glorious updates ^.^ But I'm reallllyy wondering how Joey is going to feel when he comes back to himself after that romp!
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  • From tiarakc on November 23, 2012
    There are not enough words to describe how much I am in love with this story and I am so glad that you updated! and what a wonderful update it was. You descriptions totally enthrall me and just simple leave me wanting more. Such an interesting story. Can't wait to read more, luv. :)
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